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As Naruto walked down the isle he looked around at all of his friends.  Kiba was in the back with a man that looked like it could be Sasuke just older. Hinata was with Ino and Sakura giggling about something. But then he looked up and saw Sasuke. Somehow he looked different than before in the blonds eyes. He couldn’t think of how he looked different but it was something. As he neared the alter the music started to slowly stop. The preacher began to speak but both boys weren’t paring attention they were happy enough that they were actualy doing this after everything. When it came time for the vow’s both of them realized they hadn’t written them. So they used the available vows like many other couples. “You may kiss the… just kiss.”

Sasuke didn’t need to be told twice. He wrapped his arms around his blond angel and pulled him close. The blond was already closing his eyes waiting for the Uchiha to close the space between there lips. When he finally did everyone in the audience got a nose bleed from how hot it looked. When they pulled away Sakura actually yelled encore! Naruto blushed at that and Sasuke picked him up bridal style making the blond even redder. “Sasuke you don’t need to do this.”

Sasuke smiled at Naruto. “Yeah I know but…the crowd is loving it.”

Naruto looks around and see’s Sakura bleeding a little bit still. Hinata crying from how perfect they look. Kiba was cheering him and Sasuke on. Naruto smiled as Sasuke and said “Well we could give them a little more of a show.” He grinned slyly.

Before Sasuke could ask what he had in mind Naruto started to nip at his collar bone making the raven moan a little which in turn made everyone bleed again. They were finally out of the church and in the car with a sign on the back that said “Finally married.” and they drove off to the airport where there plane would take them to Paris for there honeymoon.
:cry: *sniff sniff* well that's it folks engaged is over. it was fun writing it ^^ thanks for the suport everyone. i wish it could have gone on forever but sooner or later they had to get married. look out for the sequal to this.

ok now im sure people have questions like what did hinata do and who kiba's date turned out to be.

kiba's date was Itachi. I have no idea i was eating a muffin and then thought of them together.

All hinata related questions will be answered in the continuation of engaged. Hinata's revenge. co-writter of hinata's ravenge is non other than :iconlight-of-the-world1: one of my best friends.

thank you everyone ^^ i had fun writing this it is so sad that its over but what can you do about it.

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:iconcrazyanimelife1:
CrazyAnimeLife1 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
what was the pill for!?!?!?!?!?i must know!!!
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SakuraHarunoHere Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
I LOVED IT!!!!
 but what was the pill for????????
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I-love-my-Mutt-Kiba Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
OK LOVED IT!!Muajajaja..How funny..Onion 
 But what was that pill thing about??watudoplz 
OH WELL! All that matters is SasuNaru right now~ <3SasuNaru Glomp Happy Happy..Onion It was soo Kawaii~pikachu Rup cheeks plzPikachus nuzzles cheeks
 
 
pikachu runninThank you!!Pikachu Glomp
 
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Starfox111 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
those Pikachu icons tho xD
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SealMyFate Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Student General Artist
that was an amazing sasunaru :heart: and its even better when you have that type of imagination where you can hallucinate everything thats happening *A*
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Iveth1 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Mmm and what about the pill? What was it for? Btw really good story at least Sakura wasn't a bitch in here xD
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DaBiscuit Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Naruto1Sasuke1 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
That is the worst story ever!!
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shaydasmith Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
how dare you say that about this story, this is the best story i've ever readUwouldnt like me when Im angry 
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I-love-my-Mutt-Kiba Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
The why'd the hell you read it?
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:iconakime-shindo:
akime-shindo Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
1year later your the worst story ever XD.
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narutoxhinata101 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
r u gonna make more.
like writing that naruto acts differently or gets really sick because of what hinata gave him.
something so dramatic and in..tresting.
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clio1111 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011
SASUNARU IS SOOOO HOT!!!! GREAT STORY!!!!
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misscrosszeria Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist
I want more!! <3
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Lilay13 Featured By Owner May 7, 2011
I can't wait to see the continuation of the story!!!!!
Hinata will never get Naruto!!!Yey!!!Sasunaru 4 ever!!!!
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Amber6232 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010
That was good but what was the bottle water for and what was the pill. :)
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NBDH15 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
awww thats so cute, but wat about the drink hinata gave naruto
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:iconmeiherkhang:
MeiHerKhang Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010
TOALLY AWSOME BUT WATS DA NAME OF THE SEQUEL. :SPYED:
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darkbleach0402 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
what is gonna happen to naruto because he drank that water. what was the pill supposed to do to him?
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AliceRoseMoon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
what did hinata do??????????????????????????????????????
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kyasbumblebee Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So what was in the water?
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jenjenlovesyuuu Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010
so what was wrong with the water Hinata gave to Naruto ?
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:iconcloud-si-strife1:
Cloud-Si-Strife1 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010
how about in the sequal SASUKE GETS NARUTO PREGNANT!!
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Lynne20 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
I like that too ^•^
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:iconayaka-lynes:
ayaka-lynes Featured By Owner May 30, 2010
i like that!!
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:iconnerezza-tenshi:
Nerezza-Tenshi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010
SO CUTE KAWAII!!!!
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AngelXxKillerXx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010
SEQUAL!!!!!!!! sequal sequal sequal!!! I love your SasuNaru fan fics!!! :D
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Alisthehedgehog1 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2010  Student General Artist
I WONDER WHAT HINATA DID!!!!!!!:XD:
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shardaep900 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009  Student General Artist
Ait wat was with hinata and the bottle of messed up water? SOMEONE TELL ME!!!!
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Link-Fan444 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
waite waite waite waite! what did hinata give to naruto you said in the story that she druged it
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emoYaoIlvr Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
seriously? a muffin? omg i love muffins!!!
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Alexis-BlackRose Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
EW EW EW EW EW EW!!!! ItaKiba!? o well you were eating a muffin and muffins do crazy things to fanfiction writers
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Saegigmon Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that was a wondreful ending luv your work ^^
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Sonaira-Yukimitsu Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009   Writer
I read all your 'little stories'
I think you should shink about
to become a bookwriter ^^

I never had read such a awsome and
I can't discribe...just WOW
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SasuNaruFGForever Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
I wanna know what they do in Paris ;D

I. Love. This. Story.
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Stardusty98 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Hobbyist
awweh! I love it!!
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savrene Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2009
what about the bottle of water Hinata gave Naruto?
still, i think you should continue, i like your stories!
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marsikitty Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009
well that would be my dream honey moon...has anyone every wondered why they call it that....*lost in thought*
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Tentacle-Grapes Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
haha.... a very nice story... im amazed ^^ ... i just wanted to say THANK YOU!! <D ^^
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rossi-cool Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008
MAANNN T-T IT WAS COOL BUT I KINDA GOT TICKLED IN THE END

can't wait for the sequal!

naruto: sasu......(fainted by drug) that bitch hinata

sasuke: naruto?-naruto? wake up!
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Miya-Sakura-Uchiha Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
That was absolutely awsome!!!! And I understand the Itachi kiba thing my bestfriend Treyvn asked to be writien in my story with Kiba and he acts just like Itachi!!!! Anyway great job I loved it...but could you read my Narusasu story I'm working on? You know get a pro to look over Chapter 1 part 1 and 2. It's called An Injured love. Thank you:hug:
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ChibiSakuraChan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
I will see it ^^ thank you for reading this im glad you liked it
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peac3crazy Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
great job i loved it!!!
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karinxsuigetsu Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2008   Writer
you should add more i think naruto should have fainted or something in the middle of the isle or something
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MAKEBELIEVE-EMOGIRLS Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008  Student Writer
I loved it great job!!!!!!!!!
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witchcrystalchan Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, I read every chapter and I think you're doing just FINE. Making Hinata as a bad person is something quite creative I guess...
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RachelBeanz Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2008
Yay! Sasunaru is the best! They are so cute together! :D
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BloodyVampireUchiha Featured By Owner May 31, 2008
thats was so good. I read all of them and i couldn't stop reading them. I spent like 2 hours of my day reading them. XD great job
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Anidori15 Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
loved it!!!!!
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zombiekittiesrock Featured By Owner May 23, 2008
if only there was a sequel oh well i'm not pressuring you to make one it is your mind, and a devious one, i might add. you don't need another fangirl pestering you for a sequel!!!! but i still like these stories...oh and what was in the drink!!
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